In case you didn't know
I've been inside your head
shared your sorrows
shyly known your joys
I cannot tell the hour or day
when strolling through a reverie
I first turned that hidden corner
of my mind. And found you there.
It seemed that, unbeknown to you
you'd wandered in
found a soft and cosy place to lie
and sojourned there
You would not, could not say
how long you'd slumbered.
Was it hours?
or did you first slip in
when lone Adam lonely strode
the glades of Eden?
Were you always there?
Waiting?
Though I cannot say,
since in my mind we spoke only
with eyes and hands
and soft, soft skin.
In case you didn't know
I've loved you long
and love you still.
In a list
A contest entry
- THE RAINBOW OF YOUR EYES FOUND MY HEART by Swan song.
800 points, ended November 21, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was cool!!! dreaming of a lover to come into your head and slumber for a while and it is not that the poem is unusual it is that delivery of it!!! well done!
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Thank you for a lovely comment - I do appreciate it!
Mike
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Lovely poem.
It was a soft relaxing read
It is so innocent and sweet
Good luck in the contest
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Thank you ... though it's some time since I could claim innocence! But I do remember the time ...
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Like rocking a baby..(one that is sleeping; making those delightful yawns, and slight swallows...)
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I hadn't thought of it that way, but I certainly see what you mean. Interesting take - thank you very much.
Mike
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I thought it was gettin' awfully crowded in here. 
Sowwy, Scribe. I couldn't resist. 
*ahem* This is a beautiful poem of infinite love, so soft, sensual and serene. Good luck in the contest, my Friend. 
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Now you should never try to resist the irresistible ... besides I've always been a one-at-a-time man!
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*gaspednesses* Jeepers. Well, I was always a one-man woman, but I'm not sure that's what you actually said.
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... just that it wouldn't be crowded in my head! ... and you should never resist the chance to tease. I like teasing
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I do, too. I grew up between two brothers, Mike. I can become quite mischievous when provoked. You have been duly warned, Suh. 
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