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Why are you so ridiculous?

Why do I care
when you obviously don't
why would you ask such stupid questions
when you know I can't answer them
why do you think I don't want to be your friend
when you swear and spit in my face
why treat me like dirt
when you said I was your best friend
why are you so full of shit
when I care and you don't
why do I care



Go on tell me why or when I should start caring again

LAUGH Oh yeah that's right.. never

 

Why should I shed a tear

when you said you hate me

why call me names

when you've been told already

why can't you see it's true

when he tells you your immature

 

 

Why.. because he's right

when... never again

why am I still talking to you

when I know I'm better than you...

 

 

How about you start answering my questions now?

Author notes

Well here's about an ex-friend... Honestly I'm just glad it's over... for now I hope.

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  • Satans Mistresses
    November 10
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    I can relate to this entirely. I thought I had a lifelong friend, but I got stabbed in the back. Way to get your feelings out!


    • Seraph Avalon
      November 10
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      Thanks, sorry you can relate to this. Happens to the best of us at times. She thinks I stabbed her in the back... I know the truth though.


  • Dark-Ecanus27
    November 8

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    i really do hope its over as well. i cant believe how wrong i was about her. oh well, doesnt matter, i have everything i want in you. this is well writin and full of pure emotion. i cant believe i never realized you could write like this before.

    • Seraph Avalon
      November 8
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      I feel so much better after all this though. Really I do. Nothing else matters but you. Like i said she's full of shit. She's says I don't care how she feels. Well that's bull. But now I don't. -embraces you- Things can only get better from here. I did what i had to with our friendship. It just wasn't enough for her. She wanted me to run away from you so she could come crawling back into your arms again. She thinks that she can still control your emotions. That's just it. Your a living being. I see that and she doesn't. I love you.


  • xxuglyducklingxx
    November 8

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    Interesting.

    Wow. I really liked this. It reminds me a lot of my ex girlfriend, who was supposed to be my best friend. A lot of what happened between us and what she did to me. You did an incredible job describing what happened and gave picture to your emotion. Brava on yet again, another incredible write.

    • Seraph Avalon
      November 8
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      As Always Thanks

      Thanks for all the encouragement. Honestly I pissed her off on purpose just to get her to understand that I'm not doing this anymore. BECAUSE IT'S NOT OKAY... I hope to share more poems like this.


  • FallingApart
    November 7
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    i liked this
    good job.

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