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On Your Wings

You gave me something magical
That I still don't understand
In a sleep-drawn memory
You laid a jacket in my hand

Just like you gave your wisdom
To give me a better start
Just like you gave your laughter
A song within my heart

In my dream you told me
That the jacket could make me fly
Just like you once told me,
"You can do anything you decide you want to
If you have the heart to try"

I struggled first in flight
Holding fast to higher things
But in time you taught me
By putting wind beneath my wings

One day I lost my jacket dear
And found I could not fly so high
Sometimes I'd land a soaring leap
But I could not seem to fly

In time, though,
I flew 'round the world
With the magic that you gave me
Remembering how your soft winds
Had lifted at my wings

It was you who taught me
Not to fly
But to see

The highest heights
Above the storm
In the clearest air

To stretch my wings
Pursue my goals
And in-vision myself there



Author notes

One year I had the most amazing teacher. It was hard to imagine a year with out her. The next school year I had a dream that she handed me a green jacket, symbolizing the knowledge she gave me and the laughter and joy she shared. Over the year it increased until it came time to move on. It was then that I had the dream and in my dream, lost the jacket. For a time, without her, I forgot how to fly. But with time I remembered what she taught me and through a detailed journal could recall the good times and remembered how to fly. And I did.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 20
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    This is a wonderful take on fulfilling your dreams. Very imaginative and creative.
    The imagery is great. Very good.


  • JustaDreamer257
    November 9

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    good job i like this. you are a talented poet this is a lovely piece and flowed nicely!