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Truthful Lies

I want the truth
You give a lie
Your killing me
You want me to die

The lies you feed
Slowly eat me alive
Your planting a seed
You don't want me to survive

That's it
I'm gone
Enough blood has been drawn.

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  • Ginger Woods
    November 8
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    End rhyme does not work with this poem