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How could you Why would you

How could you
Why would you
Do that to him
It's looking grim
Another hit
He is sick of your shit
Another cut
You stupid slut
How could you
Why would you
Walk through life
When you cause him such strife
How can you look in the mirror
And like what you see here
Do you have no regret
Or do you just choose to forget
How could you
Why would you
Lie and try to cover up
Everything you messed up
Do you like living in vein
Is it that fun to cause someone pain
Does he matter at all
Or would you rather watch him fall
How could you
Why would you
Laugh as he cries
Smile as he dies
Enjoy when he's gone
And feel like you did nothing wrong
Do you swear with your life
that you won't cry
How could you
Why would you
Even think be so heartless
To act so careless
How can you be joyful
When everything is so dreadful
The pain goes on
But you won't admit you were wrong
How could you
Why would you
Go on today
When everything is so grey
When the pain should haunt you
But it doesn't faze you
You believe you were right
Just because you won the fight
How could you
Why would you
Feel no remorse

Author notes

I wrote this a couple days ago about an old friend.

I tried to make this one really sad. What did you think?

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  • CrimsonMelody19
    January 3

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    I'm sorry, this poem is amazing, but has it won gold before? Those were the conditions of the contest. If it has not won gold before, I will have to DQ it, sorry.

  • babygirl to u
    November 10, 2009

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    wow this is so good u can feel the anger in this poem i love it nice job