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Peacock 2




peacock in the grass
fans out his feathers
in self defense




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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21
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    This is more what I did lol again the line fans out his feathers is ery strong
    a good short and to the point haiku thak you for your entry

  • Humm..this is wonderful..and charming tone with the fascinating image..love it..and must admit that you did a thoughtful poetry here..well done.. and thanks..


    • Topaze gold member
      November 7
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      Thank you very much my friend and best wishes.

  • Humm..this is wonderful..and charming tone with the fascinating image..love it..and must admit that you did a thoughtful poetry here..well done.. and thanks..

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