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love is blind

i feel myself slipping
losing grip on myself.
I can hear the temptation
I can feel the seduction
I can see the shattered glass
laying on the floor
covered in depression.

I'm losing my sight
I'm losing this fight
I can't hold on
I can't stay strong

My mind is stinging
my arms are sinning
my hearts racing
my legs are shaking

I feel you
i hear you
i see you penetrating
my sinful thoughts
i feel you holding me
so gently
i hear you coaxing
my devastating desire

i slow down
i feel you enter my veins
swimming through me
i feel you calm my brain
i feel you ease my eyes
my body limp with
infected desire

addiction.
i'm free

no more brain cramps :D

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  • bonjourbunnie
    November 8
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    awe baby :3 i love it!

  • Wow!
    That was very nicely penned.
    your discriptive imagery really brought it together =]
    Im impressed! And yay for no brain cramps ^^

  • Humm..your description of the self..is very true and very obvious one..when some one is in the path of love..this happens as well..lothe mesage as well..well done...

  • Humm..your description of the self..is very true and very obvious one..when some one is in the path of love..this happens as well..lothe mesage as well..well done...