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Peacock




the male peacock
fans out his feathers
in a mating dance




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  • Swan song gold member
    November 21, 2009

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    i have done the same thing as the peacock and found out i was not a peacock lol
    I like the line fans out his feathers it made the imagery very strong


    • Topaze
      November 21, 2009
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      Thank you once again and best wishes.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 7, 2009

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    Humm..the beautiful male peacock..lol..what a thoughtful and yes beautiful story you create in few words..love it..again...thanks for sharing it...


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 7, 2009
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    Humm..the beautiful male peacock..lol..what a thoughtful and yes beautiful story you create in few words..love it..again...thanks for sharing it...