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My unicorn...

Grabbing for moonlight,
seems rather profane, somehow,

our horns lock,
our fantasies intertwine,

yet,
in the background,
someone moves to intercept us...
will they destroy us?

Take us to a new place?

Star powers,
unicorns,
narwhals,

speak to these interlopers,
tell them,
leave us....

unicorns own the night,

I want my own passions to emerge,

I want this light,
shining forever beside me....

Author notes

Seemed to see a shadow in the background reaching for the unicorns...it made me think this way...

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  • Lowell Poe
    November 27
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    Grabbing for moonlight,
    seems rather profane, somehow,

    our horns lock,
    our fantasies intertwine,

    yet,
    in the background,
    someone moves to intercept us...
    will they destroy us?

    Take us to a new place?

    Very cool lass....


    speak to these interlopers.......


    This was just a fasinating piece to me....
    it just had a real feel...
    like a real need to preserve and grow ...
    well writen lass...

    Bless you always,
    Liam


  • condor gold member
    November 7

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    Hmmm, I like and it sounds ever so haunting. something or someone creeping up on these two delightful souls. I'll have to have a closer look at that in a mo. This read beautiful and you gave it a feel of not anger, but despair that anyone could even thinkof trying to capture them and spoil their sensual moment of peace and love. I really like this a lot. Full of emotion. Thank you so much for entering and the very best in the contest.