SPRING
Flowers are blooming
The trees are budding
The temperature is rising
That is how you can tell that spring is springing
Allen
Hollandsworth
©3/19/83
Author notes
this was the first ever poem I did way back im 1983
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beautiful description on the coming of spring. really love the flowers that pop up! spring is basically a great time of year. it's not too hot, not too cold...its just right. the perfect weather. i'm also a huge fan of flowers. it's a great time of year to be able to take my son to the park. doesn't have to worry about wearing a coat. doesn't have to worry about sweating too much. gotta love it! perfect weather if you think about it.
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yes this was first i every wrote
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Very well said..You are are imporving all the time with bigger words...Mom
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thank u mom but this one was the first poem I ever wrote
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Oh yeah. I like this a lot.You seem to have a very distinct pattern to how you write your pieces. Not sure what you would call this form but it is good and in so very few words, always says so much. I love the spring...it is such an enchanting time of the year with so much going on. New life coming to the fore and such beautiful colors springing all around, while the sounds of all that are revived fill the air. Spring is the season that speaks of love and wonder. Thanks for sharing this, but I noticed that noone has commented on it until now. Did you just pop it online?
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yes i just posted it
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