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Less than Halves

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm in no mood to be dictated to

by some man

in an ivory tower

 

because he doesn't think rouge is rational;

 

 

just emotion driven drivel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt:

As Monroe quit by *xMissTake

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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Comments

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 13
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    Brevity! I love it! I want to swim in its veins. I have to admit, not a favourite of yours but certainly still high above normal standards!

  • Virgoan
    November 10
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    I am now re-thinking of joining this contest...lol

    You have a way with words and how it propels my mind into thoughts.

    Excellent work poet.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 9
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    Excellent!
    I like this.
    Joe


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 8
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    oh this is totally stunning!!


    love and blessings

    Rend


  • crivanea
    November 7

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    ohhhhh......ivory tower hmm..i'm digging around for metaphor

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