A knowing heart,
Only needs a loving kiss,
And shall look no further,
Than a willing dream,
That breathes with each wish.
Love is bounded in unison,
Without comparison,
To which that one thing love fears most.
Love is confined with one binding accord,
To conquer all without favor,
With only one hope.
To give their lives,
To a knowing heart,
With a loving kiss.
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Comments
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So much emotion and power in so few lines. I read this twice and loved the immense passion i felt for your words. Lovely poem, great meaning.
Thanks for your entry
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This is a beautiful and innocent write,
Love is so pure.
Wonderful job!
Best of luck
Love
Sonya -
nice, however what I had in mind was a Shakespearean sonnet. 14 lines, rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef gg. Syllable count = 10. Thank you for the entry, perhaps I wasn't specific enough in the rules. I am sorry if that was the case.
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wonderful entry
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Thank you love
Keep it real but above all keep it british lol
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Bravo!
This is a fine write poet. Your opening and closing are right on time. Good work.
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lovely entry...
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Great job, its beautiful
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To love with a knowing sealed with a kiss! I see you entered your poem in multiple contests! Wish you luck in all! Very nice poem indeed! Thankyou for entering my contest!
Please do not reply back!
~Sie
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Great word choice
I must admit I have a bit of a pet peeve when it comes to capitalizing every line, even after commas. So maybe you could make it grammatically correct, and have every letter lowercase that needs to be lowercase. Your poem itself is amazing. I really couldn’t suggest anything that could improve it. It seems to be next to perfection. “favour” though, should be spelt “favor”.
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Humm.so true and so wise statements you brought where the universal touch is emerged while defining the love ..wonderful poetry and its message as well..well done...
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touching warm and tender piece to a knowing heart with a tender kiss this is stunning hun .. a wonder mind and loving thoughts Hugs always Angel♥
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