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Pirate Haiku

Forever onwards
I'm doomed to sail my vessel
In search of unknown.

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  • azure85 gold member
    November 21, 2009

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    Oh, this sets a haunting voyage ahead for you dear pirate. You have some great thoughts and images within your haiku. Thank you so much for your pirate-ku.


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 9, 2009

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    kind of a mystical pirate here, bound to continue; this is a lot of ideas from so few lines of verse, a scene and some mystery, some deeper reasons for what is seen...very good verses...PK


  • MizzConstrued
    November 8, 2009
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    Nice read! I can feel it!