a patch on one eye
a parrot upon shoulder
captain black cries out
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haiku
A contest entry
- Pirate-Ku by azure85.
1500 points, ended November 21, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ahoy there, this is a great pirate-ku. I love that look of an eye-patch! Captain Black sounds like a varmint to watch out for on the Seven Seas. Thank you so much for your pirate-ku.
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Thank you very much and my best wishes.
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this is well done, a short set of words with images that will immediately bring the idea, a picture with sight and sound i think...very expressive...PK
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Thank you very much, my best wishes.
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Nice
Nice ku, enjoyed imagery :-)
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