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All The Best of your Life


All the best of your life
Sweet moments and sorrowful, too.
Whereever you were on earth or in heaven
My melody is echoing deep inside deaf hearts
and I'm breathing still my whole memory
Backwards to my magic childhood
Until my bright today
Life steped to the unknown
and upon many a scene
So much fear, and so much dispair
Gloom and joy
I did feel Down and powerful at the same time,
during my life...
and during my long wandering through my tale.

All the best of your dreams
I've been a little dew springing up from flowers..
I've been A Smile that never withers
and a heart that beats with no end...
All the best of your life
The secret of hearts is but a legend...

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  • abuyi
    November 8
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    very genuine write.

    Yes we need to take all the best of our lives.


  • ShaShay
    November 8

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    Nicely penned. Mixing past with present and giving voice to happy times. A good way to start my day. Keep sharing.
    Sharon