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You thought you had me? (Ana's Voice)

You thought you had me?
You thought you had me fooled?
My sweet child, I'm much too good.
I onlt tried to teach you the path to perfection
You tried to leave me
Well, thats out of the question.

You thought you had me?
You thought you were free?
My dear, i'm much too strong for you.
You tried to seek help.
But my voice will shine through.

You thought you had me?
You thought I was gone?
My love, you were ever so wrong.
You are already my puppet.
Tied to the strings.
We can now perform our dangerous duet

You thought you had me?
You thought you had won.
But you selfish girl,
your battle has just begun.

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  • have you ever hered of staveing the bad dog if not
    a guy has 2 dogs one is nice dosent jump on people dosent bark dosent bit and dos what he is told the other dog is bad he bits jumps barks dosent do what he is told so insted of giving the bad dog food he give both bowls to the nice dog thus staving the bad dog (this is not a rell story just a figer of spech)