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I Can't

I suffer in silence
To spare you the pain
Once you come in
You can't keave again

I hear random voices
There hiding in my mind
I can't escape her laugh
Pretending to be kind

Once your in here
She'll get you too
It wont be like me
But she'll make me lose you

I honestly can't explain
The sorrow that surrounds me
I feel so lost and helpless
I wish she would leave

I can't eat a thing
Or she yells and she cries
im punished for it all
Despite all my tries

I can't understand this
Maybe you'll explain
Ana has me captured
My mind has been slain

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This was just a free write and I kinda liked it...sooo....yeah.

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