I was dark.
All I knew was the hunt,
The blood,
And the rush.
The squealing and terror.
They bowed to me,
I was a god,
Their king.
We grew in numbers,
We hunted in packs,
All we knew,
Was the hunt.
A hand pulled me from the darkness,
Lifted me to the stars,
Showed me the moon.
No longer was there the hunt,
No longer was there blood,
There was only she.
She gave me wings,
I used to fly.
She gave me a heart,
I learned to love.
I am strong and bold,
She is odd and fragile
I am a devil,
And Alice an angel.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- TWILIGHT!!! by Smiles.Upside.Down..
400 points, ended November 8, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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So sweet :3
It really is different because it is about Jasper... The contrast between before and after knowing Alice is wonderful.
Oh, and the last lines are so great, like "She gave me a heart, I learned to love"
That was so beautiful!
Great piece!
Everdark* Kiss*
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Wonderful!
Almost everyone in this contest chose to do an entry about Edward or Bella, but not you. You stepped out of the expected and blew me away. It amazes me how you nailed Jasper on the head! You did brilliant! I loved it!!
Great job and good luck in the contest!!
Pce.N.Love.
-Manda
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