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Deathly goodbye


I want to hug you now and never hug you again

I want to kiss you and never kiss you again

I want to say goodbye and never say hello

I want to sleep and never wake

I love you but I want to never love you again

Hello and Goodbye because this is the last of both

Goodbye, I love you

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