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Your death list

Perusing back over the list of departed.
Through letters photos and so forth.

One comes to realise,
the loved ones were only with you for a brief interlude.

Then it slams home.
You are an island, and must fend for yourself.

A mercenary thought.

As another dies, it's one less to worry about.
Perhaps a blessed relief.

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  • michichoeret
    November 8
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    very mercenary but

    like the blessed relief idea


  • ennovy silver member
    November 8
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    totally heartfelt words...how true
    you speak....novy


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      November 8
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      thanks novy.....as you get older..the ones youve known seemingly forever ..are gone

  • Bob Fox
    November 7

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    PETE

    I have to say as a guy that lost 7 long time friends this year I dread at times picking up the phone. And yes it is so true that I, we, have to fend for oursleves. Sadly this is the way of life for many. Honest write and deeper then your usual stuff.

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