Many times during the night, I want you...
I want to feel your kiss; your breath
hot,
moist,
caressing my skin
and all the intimate places of my body....
In a list
A contest entry
- *~* PREWRITES CONTEST*~* by tidoubleguher.
750 points, ends December 6, 191 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
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Wow. Very sensual. I love it. Short but gives such a powerful image and feeling of such desire within your words. Excellent job. Good luck in the contest.
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mmmmmmmmmmm mi kind of woman.. hehe
Enough said. And well said.
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it speaks in volumes......even though its short & sweet......sensually implied.....not misplaced in its pace.......gr8 sensuality.....love peace & harmony
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ooh very passionate
and blooming sensuality
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Sensually delicious; I'm left all hot and bothered and it is a short write
Bravo
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I can't wait till that day It has to be soon.... I am going crazy!!
You did a great job on this one honey! I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Very soft feel. I enjoyed the sensual feel without saying the words. It's obvious you have a talent for implication instead of having to be vulgar or too wordy. LOL Like I'm being right now. I'll stop and just say, great read.
Sharon
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Well! this is definately seductive and great take on the prompt sensual well done
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I am moaning..you have left me humbled..lol..Great write..seductive sensual..compelling..good write..so good.I know you do not respond to comments on your poems..That is fine..Jusy know you did a wonderful job on this..truly
John
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this couldn't get more beautiful...
so short, yet packed with love & passion.
the picture is breathless, and every word you penned
is so soft and pretty, very tenderly written.
i really love the title.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
luv u.
joyce
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Indeed brilliance in brevity here..I never thought that brevity could be this steamy and sensual..however, you proved me wrong. The image itself is a great metaphor Combined with your words, this is a yummy piece
wish you the best YASB ::huggles:: David
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stunning piece dear Sandy for you captured the essence in this beautiful prompt Hugs always Angel♥♥♥
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Oh yes... you do sensual justice. This was just right!
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just enough to leave one wanting MORE
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Woot~
Wow!
Oh My Word~ this is a Beauty and done its duty
by fogging up the screen~ again
Love the direction You took the prompt also
the smile on face this brings~
Woo Hoo
Precious penning Hot Stuff
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice Beautiful One
Best wishes in the contest~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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yum
mmmm, nice and so very luscious, but hard to read at work you know, makes the bags look good. hehehe Great job
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