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An acrostic for assholes actually.

 

 

 

 

 

A lot of people...not poems, just names
Lots of bullshit and lots of blame
Lots of bitches and emo shit
Pathetic little punks - i'm sick of it
Overly sensitive, with fingers fond to point
Every orifice filled with theories to disjoint
This stage where we have words,
Realities we choose to share-
Yet dicks dictate catastrophes...and cowards feign to care!


it sucks.
like shit. (so deal with it).
or worse.
but oh well. (what the hell...).
too bad...so sad. (aren't i bad?).
shoot me now. (you dozey cow).

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

this was a PM message...but Griswold dared me to post it into this contest...& i'm no scaredy-cat. so yeah...it's simpler than anything i dare post usually & will be deleted after this contest...but for what it is, it's certainly honest.

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  • Hetha gold member
    8 hours ago
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    -Love you


  • Griswold gold member
    November 21
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    ROFL, and you won!!! Congrats.


  • Elrenia
    November 19
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    Personally, I do not think you should delete it after the contest. Perhaps it should be posted on the front page and in all the groups. A lot of mirrors would be utilized if you did.

    Well wishes in the contest.
    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • Summer Daze silver member
    November 10

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    Too many poets are "sensitive" and "artistic" and think that AllPoetry is the real world. Write what you want, talk to who you want and try to ignore the drama...that's my plan.


  • blood libel.
    November 8

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    haha, oh man... this is reallyyyy good.... you use alot of big words. i defffinitely wouldn't want to be enemies with you though. i feel sorry for whoever this is written to. ]=

    oh and i saw the word allpoetry in there... are there a lot of mean people here? i haven't met any yet and hope i never will. haha.

    anyway, good job &don;t stop writing.

    carly,
    aka
    xx. red.


  • Never Fall in Love
    November 8

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    Some people are just pathetic bastards - so just ditch them


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 8

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    BANG

    (better a friend should shoot you, La)


  • Nickelspring gold member
    November 7

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    Well, there you have it!
    You

    Kris


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 7

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    Well, why don'tcha tell us how you REALLY feel???

  • SoulWhispher
    November 7

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    This is most amazingly funny and yet true, great job as always, John


  • Bluemonday silver member
    November 7
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    just loved it...Ha..


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 7

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    Holy jeepers..

    l.o.l. damn..this stings!! l.o.l. ouch ouch and OUCH!!! you go lady..exceptional acrostic!

    • Laura Lamarca gold member
      November 7
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      it was a 2-minute IM...if i wouldve spent 5 minutes writing instead, i would've permanently damaged every drama queen online emotionally for the rest of their lives. it has been said in the past that i can fell a forest of giants with one lick of my tongue - it is a truth i'm not always proud of, yet a truth all the same. IM acrostics stop me getting banned.


  • islekine gold member
    November 7

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    LOL

    Why delete it? Pass it on! AP of all "people" should be able to take a freaking joke! Nice dare Scott! hehehe
    Thanks for sharing...
    best wishes...always!

    and

    • Laura Lamarca gold member
      November 7
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      lol
      don't encourage him.
      he's already a rebel to any cause.
      that's it now...he's going to make my life hell.
      (no Scott, you CAN'T set me my own La-La Challenge)


      • Griswold gold member
        November 7
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        Hey now thats an IDEA Laura I have a couple of forms I've developed....


        • Laura Lamarca gold member
          November 7
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          f**k off.

          dayum, i'm always so polite to you Scott.

          • Griswold gold member
            November 7
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            Oh piss off Laura, you know I don't take your crap, that's why you put up with me. now about those forms......


            • Laura Lamarca gold member
              November 7
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              now now Grisowsky...don't lower yourself into bastardism.
              here, have a drink.


              • Griswold gold member
                November 7
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                I'm an Alcoholic, got Dr. Pepper instead? that's why i'm at my best when being a bastard.

                • Laura Lamarca gold member
                  November 7
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                  sshhh...it's apple juice...i wasnt sure if you were underage or not; so i thought it better to be safe than sorry. you're bad enough when you've been snorting oxygen, beer would surely be too dangerous to even consider.

  • Griswold gold member
    November 7
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    And it speaks honestly of AP and it's attention seeking drama queens. I didn't even realize it was an Acrostic in the IM Go Laura!!! Scott


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 7

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    Oh wow you certainly told it like it is La! Good one! Love it.
    Best wishes in the contest


  • penman gold member
    November 7

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    Whoa!

    Literary stabbing at its best. A superb write. Now watch out for flying eyelashes

    • Laura Lamarca gold member
      November 7
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      haha. i can cope with eyelashes Mr penman sir...it's when they start slinging blatant bullshit to all & sundry that i start to become concerned...for it is then when ignorance and assumption pull back their arrows and become poised whilst waiting for the order to shoot - & it concerns me only because my arrows are sharper and my aim so much better & when i stake those scars upon their pock-marked facades, i do it with only truth...& Mr penman sir...truth at AP stings far more than any fabrication ever can.


    • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
      November 7
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      LOL@flying eyelashes

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