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Places I've Never Been Before

I've never been to China,
to see the crumbling Great Wall.
I've never been to Rome
to see the Tower of Pisa fall.
I've never been to Egypt,
to see the Tombs of Kings,
I've never been to Louisiana,
to see the great New Orleans.
I've never been to Brazil,
to see the Amazon Rain Forest.
I've never been to Harvard,
to pass a grueling finals test.
I've never been to Mexico,
to visit all the poor.
I've never been to Las Vegas
to visit the M&M store.
I've never been in New York,
to be dwarfed by buildings,
I've never been in a hurricane,
and lost all of my things.
I've never been in high regard,
I'm just an average jane.
But they've never really seen,
how much more I have to gain.

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  • Rashida
    November 7
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    Very nice piece!