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Requiem

A perfect reality in the realms of beauty.

What a hazy feeling of tranquility, a Kyrie of succulence.

The flowers bloom,smuggling me  brightly with a requiem that radiates perfection.

Have the angels blessed this day, or has this light of mercy opened a door of blasphemy.

Oh, codex of obscene beauty, oh nostrum of mercy, never resent me from your contorting array.

I now walk along your open path with zeal,may not my bravo send you away.

For I  am in ah, today the heavens  open up with melancholy, wilting away so that I may long for insolence.

May my blood mark your path oh, kyrie of light!   

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By Nicolay, crying on the inside about to cut on the outside....

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 10
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    Have the angels blessed this day, or has this light of mercy opened a door of blasphemy.

    Wow! I really liked this line. ^^^ You did an amazing job writing this hun. Keep up the great writing, keep smiling and good luck in everything you do.

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 8
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    ~~~~Wonderfully written~~~
    Thank you so much and good luck to you!