There's dust on my crown
When the demons come to surround
Broken down I sit on this throne
Convulsing and trying but I'm still alone
Yeah I'm still here
Crippled by my own reveries
Drowning in flooding memories
Why am I still here?
Why am I still held by fear?
tired and afraid, everything is gray
Nightmares confound me, my soul's on display
In life I'm nervous,like I don't deserve this
Trying but I can't get away from this
Crippled by my own reveries
Drowning in flooding memories
Why can't they disappear?
Why am I still here?
My sanity is slain
Where you always my bane?
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The first 2 lines are a bit off but other that it's well written.

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i thought this was awesome, the lines really flowed well and the rhyming wasnt forced at all, awesome job and keep it up




