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The Song of the Attention Seeker

Self-indulgence starts flowin'
in my attention-seeking poems.
I rejoice in showin'
pseudo-tortured emotion.

I need you to like me.

Ask me "how I'm doing".
You'll want to know more.
You're the one I'm screwing -
I feel rich when I'm poor.

I'm going to make you like me.

When everything's fine,
I'm just fun and "insane!".
I'm going to make you mine,
now that you think I'm in "pain".

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  • amnouup
    November 9
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    Truth

    Dark truth potrayed as fun, well done :-)


  • thoughtfuldead
    November 7

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    AMAZING

    Haha GREAT PIECE. The mind of a narcissistic fool is what I see here and I LOVE your take on it. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING


  • mcope8050
    November 7

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    wonderful thought here

    the attention seeker is summed up PERFECTLY here,,, kinda funny,,, but exact and true,,, thanks for sharing