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Scattergories

So you are so mellifluent and distracting,
A poison to tomorrow,
You travel between light and darkness
But sublime deprivation is your expression of delight.

Degrade and dehumanise i'll always care.
Sell me oblivion at nicotine's price.
A defenceless and trenchant organ remains,
Impervious to threats, sickened and loved.

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  • findingurself.less gold member
    November 7

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    I'm not gonna lie... I had to get my dictionary! LOL!! I love this, even if you did call me a poison! There is something about it that makes me read it over and over! Every time I read it, I find something new that I like. I like how this is not just about me, but about you as well... Great job! I LOVE it!