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Star

 

Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

I wish apone you for what?

A puppy?

A new sister?

No, I think I wish I was a star

Like a Diamond in the sky

 

In the dark blue sky you keep,
For you never shut your eyes,
Till the sun is in the sky.
As your bright and tiny spark,
Starts to go out,

Like a flame about to go out, just flickering

 

 

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  • The Devil18
    November 11
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    yes

    yes this is wonderful nice job

  • peacebrat
    November 8
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    for you never shut your eyes
    till the sun is in the sky i love those to lines keep writing i like your work