I feel so dark and lonely
like I’ve been betrayed by all my friends
it’s got me so down and out
and it bothers me to no ends
Life can be so cruel
it sure has it’s ups and downs
I’ve been on the roller coaster ride
and lately I’m just full of frowns
I feel lost in the darkness
thrust into the void so black
where nothing lives or stirs
and light seeps through a crack
How can I describe the loss
of everything that meant so much to me
my mind spirals down and out of sight
I feel trapped and will never be free
A contest entry
- My Wish Is To No Longer Exist by Heavenly Angel.
400 points, ended November 7, 11 entries
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Comments
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i must say that your imagery is very expressive!
keep working on your writing, i feel like you can really dig deep and really put more into your poetry =]
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Thank you very much, my best wishes.
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One could say that this pretty much sums up a LOT of what I've felt...
It strikes a few raw nerves at any rate...
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts
All the best to you!
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