Awake ..
from your dark realm night
leaving your world of bright stars
silently drifting through the lonely night ..
protector of darkness...
Thinking...
your love .. why am i so drawn to you ?
Collecting scattered pieces of dreams...
Let me drink the sound of your sympathy...
Seduce me with your silent screams...
touch ...
want ... feed me
bathe me on the unholy fire
let us melt ..
Smother me in your deceptive flight...
Steal my heart ..That's my desire...
...Descended...
Fall again tomorrow...In our bliss...
love me ...
Whisper to me of futures impossible...
Corrupt me with your secret kiss...
We both know it's need its...
..... Insatiable
A contest entry
- Long Ago When Mercury Descended High On The Moon (OPTIONS!!!!) :P! by xxuglyducklingxx.
700 points, ended November 9, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Share The Passion In Your Heart by ennovy.
1100 points, ends December 1, 22 entries
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damn..
..you know what, i'm just gonna stop reading your poetry coz this is killing me.. i love this piece, so melodic, the way its structured and poem itself,
"want ... feed me
bathe me on the unholy fire
let us melt ..
Smother me in your deceptive flight...
Steal my heart ..That's my desire..."
i wonder what was going through your mind..
blac.
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thank you
much love -
a god write....lovely images to ponder
thank you for entering our contest....
novy & brazos
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thank you for your feedback
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I enjoyed your formatting....not always a fan of how your penned it, but it works here because of your choice of grammar
Not sure why you did not CAP *touch*?
No worries, it's still a god write....lovely images and thoughts to ponder here.......good luck!
Bear -
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aww thank you for taking your time to read this
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wow.. I was truly melted into a puddle by the end. This is beautiful and so very deep. Good luck in the contest (I know I will need it now!! haha
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wow very Deep !!!!
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bless you i will ! x
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wow i have never been on sumbody top list before lol thank you for putting it on finalist
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thank you for allowing me to express my self through this contest i loved it ! x
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AWW!!!!!
You don't have to thank me. I'm glad it could help. That's what they are there for. Anytime you need anything. If I can help, I'm more than willling.
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Epitome of perfect penning to a flawless prompt..
Wow. This was....ahem.! I loved this. I really did. You captured the prompt, broke it down, and rebirthed through blood stronger than the sweetest kiss and the purest of desires..though I feel like it ended too soon and is missing something. . This was a sensual piece. Thank you so much for composing, entering, A great write. Keep Writing. And Good Luck. Wow...XD.
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