Flying, falling, flailing, flat,
Floor, face, "Fuck!"
Red, blue, bulge, swelling,
Swirling, spinning, "Dizzy."
Balance : stable :: world : flat,
Conscious : no :: "Are you okay?" : "..."
My head is a shoe, complete with new laces,
I'll be more careful, when competing in races.
Author notes
This was done completed in just one sitting, but I enjoy getting ripped up a bit from you guys for me rough editions. Builds character. 
I hope you enjoy!
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Comments
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Great!
I just love the first two lines! Very funny. I think the title works well. Maybe you could change it to Poet Takes a Trip or Fall of a Poet. Hmm...
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O.o I like "Poet Takes a Trip" Thank you
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