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It'll be okay Jack

Your heart is swimming
In an ocean of emptiness,
So many people around me,
Still the feeling of loneliness.
I know it hurts,
Its taking over your life,
You just want it to go away,
Cut it out with a knife.
You're gonna get better
I know you will,
One of these days,
The immune system will fill.
You'll smile again,
Like you used to,
Not like now,
When it hurts you.
It''ll be okay jack
You'll go farther,
I know its not easy,
Its all getting harder.



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  • Montey silver member
    2 days ago
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    This was beautiful, sad and hopeful all at the same time.If its based on someone you know,then you clearly care very much and I wish you both well.A lovely,lovely poem.Montey

  • Xx-NYAPPY-xX-Kailey
    November 7
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    Amazing

    This was Amazing i loved it i b talking to u so i have one hand but i love