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Prima Donna Phlegm

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Oh the portents for precarious panged performance
when winds whirl wild whips wickedly wounding
even if the blood is never spilled!

Because a shadow is a saber and fly is a demon
for the one with frail and gossamer lace as skin,
who was cursed with inordinate pain membranes
able to gracious abide in that languishing labyrinth
of such hideous cruelty from unkind gestures,
which inflicted such agony though touched with feathers.

It’s a malady of malaise measured mischievously
in the poignant and putrid power of prima donna phlegm,
an anxiety anchor aggravating aches and angst.

Alas we must bound the suffering butterfly
because those wings otherwise can’t soar,
course they are bent anyway
just like the one who owns them,
which probably is what helps
make every dribble, drool and drop
into an impassioned crusade
to silence the rumbles of injustice
that only appear in the mirror
behind the throne in that person’s head.

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  • My Chronos gold member
    2 days ago
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    Great write...very articulate.


  • Griswold gold member
    November 14
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    Heh, ya well, I'd think you knew a few gays the way this reads to me. I do know more than a few, and this pretty much suits them to a "T" Does Abercrombie have a "T" in it? Well done my friend and best of luck... Scott

  • Bravo! Wonderfully penned and to the point Great alliteration. You can write on anything and so easily!
    best wishes in this contest. Methinks it may to difficult to judge


  • islekine gold member
    November 7

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    Whole thing rocks...

    But the ending is priceless...
    which probably is what helps
    make every dribble, drool and drop
    into an impassioned crusade
    to silence the rumbles of injustice
    that only appear in the mirror
    behind the throne in that person’s head.
    Perfect!
    Thanks for sharing your creative talent...great alliteration!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 7
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    Well done, thw wording is supurb! Great write!

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