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stuck here










Time was like wind
brushing over your eyes
till the dust became skin
and forever became
fact.









Author notes

prompt:

'Death must be so beautiful. To lie in the soft brown earth, with the grasses waving above one's head, and listen to silence. To have no yesterday, and no to-morrow. To forget time, to forgive life, to be at peace.'

17 words

A contest entry

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  • HereComesTheSun
    November 8

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    congrats on the bronze
    i love to see you write short rights
    becuase it shows your talent
    and how with less then twenty words you can blow a reader away


  • Tzipora
    November 7
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    beautiful. very beautiful. thank you for entering.