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the words you said

i can hear what your heart is saying
i see it in your eyes even when you blink
i try to keep up with your steps
i pick up the pieces and try to guess
on why our life is such a mess
i hear it in your words
i see it in your eyes
it plays back over and over in my mind
so i say i love you and goodbye

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 12
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    it plays back in my mind
    so i say i love you and goodbye
    mmmm this is so soul stirringly stunning
    took the air out of the room
    T


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 10
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    Sentimental and Sad...

    Good write, I really could feel the emotion within this heart-felt write. I'm wishing you all the best!! Keep it flowing, Poet!!
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    November 8

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    Awww, this is such a sad poem but one that I think a lot of people can relate to. I can see the emotion in these words. Well done, this is really a great write.