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Vision of Paradise

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Glimpse of paradise, nary strife nor harm
where beast and humans abide together
waking each morning, without an alarm
changing seasons always brings fair weather.

The Bible give us glimpse, a once glory
how Adam and Eve live in the garden,
sin brought death and sorrow, and it’s gory
with Christ ransom sacrifice came our pardon.

I look to a time when the lame will leap,
no more braces and crutches to walk with,
only tears of joy, never time to weep
this truth, God cannot lie, or tell a myth.

Glorious times for all to have a part,
listen to God’s Word and open your heart…

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 26
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    I await that day when Jehovah will transform the earth to a paradise.


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 26
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    Wonderful glimpse.

    I love it. Great job. Congrats on the bronze. I loved how you described how the paradise was for Adam and Eve. I look forward to the paradise on earth. Oh, how wonderful that will be for all faithful mankind.

    TQOP


  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 8
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    ~~~So beautifully written~~~
    Thank you so much and good luck to you!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 8

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    This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. Great words of wisdom.
    Golden.

    Joe