R ain falls gently in the remnants of my heart
A s your grave I approach in sorrow.
I n a trance my mind one thought does impart:
N e'er again will I look forward to the morrow.
D affodils from beds that you once had tilled
R each joyously from the basket I carry.
O n knees of torment I bend cold and chilled
P ronouncing in a voice old and airy:
S arah...
O h how I missed you today like the yester
F or how long will this wound in me fester?
L oving you were and radiant like the sun
O h so warm and beautiful too!
S arah, my love, how my life's been undone
S ince I live now in grief without you...
Author notes
Contest: Acrostics
A rhyming acrostic...
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostics by Diminished Capacity.
1075 points, ended November 8, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful and heartbreaking...
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A most touching write... lol, that you have so beautifully penned. Your words are emotional, and so deeply expressed. Very well penned. A tender poem ,that touched my very heartstrings. Well done.
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brilliant and beautiful
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Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, yet sad at the same time. Wonderful job, thank you so much for entering.
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