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I think I am in love

I think I am in love
he is my dove.

Why didn't I see
he was right in fount of me?

He is so pretty,
He is a king
I would sit by his feet
and worship him.

Does he feel the same?
Does he see me for me?

He looks like he does
and he treats me like his queen.

But those eyes are they true?
Or was it a drunken look that he always gives me.

he was not drunk when I last saw him
and he held me for hours happy and content.

He stop a guy trying it on,
he saw I was  scared and the guy was gone.

I think I am in love,
but is it true?
I know I want him but does me want me too.

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I know it the gamma is not so good and that the words are not great
I sort it out anything else point it out thanks
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