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Black Heart

My heart beats darkness, this pain is unbarable to follow along decieveful.!
When I think about your love I grow uncomfortable.
My eyes bleed tears.
My mind shed memories.
You're like a bullet in my heart so painful and worst of all powrful.
My heart is darkening now it's extremely black.
There is no happiness, there's only sorrow.

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  • ash003
    1 day ago
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    AWESOME

    IT'S A VERY GOOD POEM.SAD N EMOTIONAL.....VERY WELL EXPRESSED....

  • Looney gold member
    2 days ago
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    GOOD

    THIS WAS GOOD! REALLY EXPRESS YURSELF


  • Vampyrecutter
    November 10
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    This is really good. I like it. I can totally relate to this. Good job.