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A Grieving Indiviual

Life is overwhelming her; She's to the point she's confused.
The world has no direction; sorrow grows in her soul.
Her heart beat is the only thing keeping her alive.
Pain crawls through her body; hope isn't a priority.
Faith has disappeared.
She's in the wilderness just trying to find a path of brighter days.
Her mind is parinoid; her dreams are silently sleep.

Wishing upon that day when everything will come to a end.

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  • ash003
    November 24
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    REALL GOOD.....
    nice job!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 8

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    You have a few spelling and word errors but other than that this is a great write. You did a wonderful job on this. Keep on writing, and keep on smiling. Good luck in all you do.