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My Wish Is To No Longer Exist. . .









. . . .Vanish to a distant day. . . .










Dream and sail away . . . . away. . . . . 










. . . . . . Vanish to a distant day-










-And pray I don’t exist today. . .

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i've never wrote a poem like this, it only has 4 lines and it rhymes. it's spaced out to give it length and feeling. almost like smeone thinking, slowly coming to the realization of the desire that was hidden in their deepest part.

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  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    November 7

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    Well done
    Reads as someone speaking from their heart of hearts
    Thank you for sharing
    Best wishes,
    ~Heavenly~