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Loves Gamble


My heart begins to race
as I gaze on that beautiful face,
A single look in those eyes
made me begin to realize
that my heart
will never want to part
from that gorgeous girl

Those lips that I miss
the memory of your kiss
the way you made me feel
like nothing else was real
you made it disappear
all of the fear
of falling in love

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  • bunnyslasher157
    November 10
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    Good job with this. Good luck and keep writing!!