My Jaan
He’s out there somewhere,
Out in the distant sunset,
Smiling gaily at our fate,
Another love attempt to a mistake.
But he is my life, the man who loves me deeply,
My jaan who is mine, the man who is the one for me…
Somewhere out there he waits silently,
While I cry here, reaching out to eternity.
My jaan, with kind eyes and a beautiful soul,
Is to be the man who’s the only one to keep me whole-
His aching distant far away from my dying sun,
Meri Jaan, kyun hai mili yeh dooriyan?
Author notes
hey i know this is in english.... buh some of it's in like hindi lol
well....
please leave a comment though!!!
-s w e e t s i n s
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A contest entry
- Azaaad nazmain/free verse. by fatizeh.
750 points, ended November 21, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You certainly show a sense of faith in destiny and a youthful yearning for beloved. I liked this. As commenters before have said, it's very sweet. Best wishes in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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its really so sweeeet.....
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This was just beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. =} good luck in the contest.
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this is a really good write.Im glad i came across your page through fatizehs page.this is awsum.nice try
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lol this is awesome...good attempt
good luck
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yup realy good write
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