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my tugging hold

My past has become my present

the world is turning on me

why must the world make me

plea.

 

Can't break free of this tugging

hold my mind has gone to the

freeway to never return.

 

My head feels like it's ready

to explode.

 

So many feelings in one day

to many thoughts to think

about play.

 

My life is over no longer

hopeing to see what 

happens

 

when you put your word

on hold.

 

just let me be, just let me go

so i can go to my lonely home

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sorry was a little sick when i wrote this

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 7

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    This was really good. I'm sure your life will work out. "just let me be, just let me go
    so i can go to my lonely home" Very powerful ending. You did an excellent job on this piece.


    -Steve-