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Broken (Extreme EMO, don't click if you can't handle it)

why let some one in

they just destroy you

rip you heart out and stomp

on it. 

 

My only release is the glinting

steel of my trusty little

razor blade

 

draw it slowly

across my wrist

 

press it into my flesh

and watch as 

the blood blooms

and I sigh in relief

 

squeeze my hand into a 

fist make it tight so

the blood pumps

faster from my veins

 

I feel my arm grow cold

and it spreads into my chest

its pooling on the floor

such a pretty shade of red

 

Red, his name is on my lips

as I slip into unconsciousness

 

I won't ever feel this pain again

 

Author notes

was reading a thread on the pub and it was about emo poetry. people were making up little emo poems so I chose to participate, what came out is here above. Just a little angst. I don't usually write emo poetry, well at least this kind of emo poetry.

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  • just2write silver member
    November 8
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    It doesn't hurt to delve into writing in areas that are new. This can help us to grow as writers. Suicide by any means is a very selfish act that impacts the lives of those they leave behind. Many will be scarred forever, beating themselves up for not recognizing the signs of depression. Those who contemplate suicide often forget those who quietly love them, and unlesh this ultimate hurt to make a statement to someone who likely doesn't care. No one is worth tossing your life for. Absolutely no one. Rose.


    • Little Eagle Greeters member
      November 8
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      Thanks

      and I completely agree with you. I would never contemplate suicide. Its just not in me. I know how important my daughter is to me and I would never put her through that pain.

  • Nuckols.Lydia
    November 7
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    LOVE I


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    November 7
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    You scare me my daughter, But I knew better

    Isnt life about anger. hate. love and most of all We forget those who loves us most or we love the most. Funny how those who does this really goesnt know what it is like to love when they finally find it like when they come to the funeral to the one they wanted to show them how much they love and only get shove away for showing their love/ Life isnt a bed of roses that is for sure. I love you
    Mom

    • Little Eagle Greeters member
      November 7
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      I scare myself sometimes

      Its difficult to feel so strongly these feelings that have been dormant for far too long. Its like a blind man getting his sight back, everything is so bright and colorful it hurts the eyes.

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