Imagine the wonders
within a book and all the
adventures it holds
whose breath of life
began from a tree,
transformed by man
to set us free
to wander to worlds
of infinite possibilities
across the stars and open sea's
come enter this realm
of amazing sights,
allow your mind to take flight
channel your dreams and
ignite your soul, to a dimension
where endless tales are told
for you're the captain
of the ship, so take the
helm and go on a trip
into the miracle place
they call a book, for all
it takes is just one look
Author notes
Poem was inspired by contest picture prompt.
see link below
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2466017
Artisit Credit: Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Prompt For You #5 by Jeremy0826.
1900 points, ended November 21, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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It's all abbra kadabra...misdirection...a slight of hand and eye. Art is a lie that lets you see the truth. -c
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I enjoyed this. "Transformed by man to set us free"- I like this line.
I would change the second to last stanza. The flow is disrupted a bit. "so take the helm and go on a trip" could flow better if it was "so grab the helm and take a trip." Just my opinion. I recommend not acknowledging it.
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bravo-this poem is beautiful my friend.
ah, the pleasure of seeing an inspiring poem for once
thank you for shining your light, and exposing the loveliness underneath.
love,
jin
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"for you're the captain
of the ship, so take the
helm and go on a trip
in the miracle place
they call a book, for all
it takes is just one look" i loved this poem!!! but,. this was my definete favorite!! i love your poems but this one is good -
Yes indeedy! ...
and you have shared of a dynamic concept and tied it in with the beautiful painting well. j
y
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wow dude..
this is outstanding, full of wonder, and fantastic language..loved it dude!
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