My vision of the world
Through crystal
Seems to expose all of me
So I slink into a corner
Afraid to be naked
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Author notes
Contest Entry.
The poem was not directly related to the pic but it seemed to fit okay. This is a pic of a public toilet somewhere in Europe, made of one-way glass; you can see out but not in. It makes me think of how I feel when I view the world with inhibition - sometimes it seems that everything I can see can see right back at me, yet I forget that I am a mere spec amidst the thick of it.
A contest entry
- Jury of Your Peers ~~ #34 by islekine.
700 points, ended November 17, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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WOW If this wasn't a double edged sword I don't know what is. A very cool write indeed. I very much enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Bill
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THis is a double sided poem. Without the pic it takes on a whole new meaning.
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Thank you for dropping by....
Yes, the poem was written without the pic
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interesting picture and the poem does sort of fit it lol. I like the breif way you explain something quite large... I think it is obvious we all hide ourselves from the world, this is an interesting take on it.
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Short, funny and great! I'd be afraid to be so seemingly exposed! Why would anyone want to see out--kind of distracting! We all hide in corners in various ways especially at the thought of more being seen than we're comfortable with!
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Wonderful! lol
I don't think I would be able to use one of those!...lol...what a trip!
Thanks for sharing...best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
and
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So well said. We are often bogged down by plights that aren't there. Bravo and all the best in the contest.
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Lol chinmay,
Was that an unintentional pun? bogged down!
Thank you for dropping by and commenting
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Pun, very much intended. Lol
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You're welcome.
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