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Forever Together

What makes me happy?
A myriad of situations, occasions.
Walking along the beach at night and feeling the breeze in my hair.
Smelling the salty water, tasting it on my tongue.
Being there with the one I truly love.
Feeling his hand in mine as the ocean waves exhale to the sandy shore.
The chill in my bones leaving me from the warmth of his presence beside me.
Walking along this endless sandy beach,
Letting it remind me of our endless love for each other.
Looking into his eyes to see me reflected back in them.
Knowing we are truly meant for each other.
Rising and falling together with the good times and the bad.
Every experience with them a treasure an adventure.
For better for worse, forever, for always.
My soul mate.

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  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    November 15
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    This is a beauty.
    I love the lines
    'Knowing we are truly meant for each other.
    Rising and falling together with the good times and the bad.'
    Now this is when you have found true love.
    Best of luck
    Love
    Sonya