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False sense of security

I thought you were gone for good,
out of my life,
gone from the picture,
then you return like a flash of bright light
and I am left blinded, searching for my brain.
Do you love me still?
Have I been replaced?
Is all of this a risk that I am willing to take?
I know full well that this could end bad,
and I could be deported,
to 'kill yourself' land.
But I'm hoping for the best,
yet expecting the worse,
my love for you,
almost feels like a curse.
All I want is your arms,
and your tender soft voice,
but you're so far away,
im not sure it can work.
Just let me know,
give me a sign,
if there is hope for us,
farther down the life line.

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