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Bershka Babes






The air vibrates with the blaring music
and the clattering stilettos
that dominate the floor


Keep your back straight and relax
Walk as if you own the place
The mirror is your trusting companion
Blend in with the model mannequins


Peacock feathers seem to grow out of every girl's back
Brushing the lights
Trying in vain to outshine the colourful clothes







Welcome to Bershka












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  • XxWillow LeafxX
    November 8

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    amazing...

    I love the imagery and the anticipation that flows through this poem. i am in love with how you said "clattering stilettos that dominate the floor" that alone is an amzing line. I also like the simplicity of the backgound, yet it makes me think neon. Excellent write(: